Monday, August 13, 2018

Quick write

“Leave me alone, I’m about to watch the lights in the sky!” Pauline bellowed. It was a dark, moon lit saturday night. And Pauline’s friend Josef was repeatedly texting her saying ‘what's up?’, she had just recorded a voice message and sent it to Josef. Then Josef replied ‘are you sad?😞’. “why”!!!!! Yealed Pauline. Then a guard came and dragged her away from the festabull, “noooooooooo”.


This is my quick write, I was givon 5 minutes to write a story with adjectives and a story starter! Learning Objective: use adjectives and adverbs to make the reader want to continue reading.

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