This term our class has bean reading fairy tales! this week we read rapunzel, so we had to describe a moment in time!
The bright, blossoming garden was surrounded by a giant, stone wall, even though it was old it still towered above most things. No one dared to enter! It belonged to a sorceress who possessed great power, she could level hills to tiny mounds. She could give life even, but could also take it away! Without knowing the tales that it held, you could tell that the sorceress did not want anyone in! In the garden there were beautiful flowers and herbs, shining with dew!
Original sentence:
The garden was surrounded by a high wall, and no one dared enter, because it belonged to a sorceress who possessed great power and was feared by everyone.
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